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Angliholic Posted 19 years ago
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0 Here is another scribble, scrabble, or sketch of my perspectives of life; please edit and make critical comments on it: 02 br
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00 Life is but a hasty/brisk/fleet/expeditious leg of myriad journeys of eternity; therefore, it's not worthy/worthwhile/worth it to be greedy, angree, delusory/delusive, arrogant, and doubtful/suspicious/dubious/uncertain/questionable. 02 br
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00 Please help me to decide which word between slashes fit better? 0-
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00 Life is but a hasty/brisk/fleet/expeditious leg of myriad journeys of eternity; therefore, it's not worthy/worthwhile/worth it to be greedy, angree, delusory/delusive, arrogant, and doubtful/suspicious/dubious/uncertain/questionable. 02 br
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00 Please help me to decide which word between slashes fit better? 0-
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02 br 02 br 00 Brisk would work. 02 br 02 br 00 Worthy is incorrect here. " 02 br 02 br 00 Angree = angry 02 br 02 br 00 Delusory/delusive - not the right word here.
- 02 br 02 br 00 Brisk would work.
- 02 br 02 br 00 Worthy is incorrect here.
- " 02 br 02 br 00 Angree = angry 02 br 02 br 00 Delusory/delusive - not the right word here.
- 02 br 02 br 00 Suspicious implies that the person has some reason not to be trusting.
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0 Hi Angli. 02 br
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00 Hasty suggests an action which is carried out too quickly without proper planning (and regretted later). 02 br
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00 Brisk would work. It's the sort of word you would use to describe walking quickly when the weather is cold. 02 br
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00 Fleet and expeditious are both somewhat old-fashioned and not quite right for th
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00 Hasty suggests an action which is carried out too quickly without proper planning (and regretted later). 02 br
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00 Brisk would work. It's the sort of word you would use to describe walking quickly when the weather is cold. 02 br
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00 Fleet and expeditious are both somewhat old-fashioned and not quite right for th
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0 Thanks, Lil' Ruby Rose, for the elaborate and expressive comments. 02 br
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00 According to your advice, here I rewrite it again to make sure it sound right: 02 br
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01 font 00 Life is but a brisk leg of myriad journeys of eternity; therefore, it's not worth being greedy, angree, arrogant, vindicative, and dubious. 02 font
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00 According to your advice, here I rewrite it again to make sure it sound right: 02 br
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01 font 00 Life is but a brisk leg of myriad journeys of eternity; therefore, it's not worth being greedy, angree, arrogant, vindicative, and dubious. 02 font
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1 font 00 Life is but a brisk leg of myriad journeys of eternity; therefore, it's not worth being greedy, 00 angry 00 , arrogant, vindi 00 ct 00 ive, and 02 font 01 font 00 dubious (see my comment above) 02 font 02 br
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01 font 00 Just an additional thought: 'journey' implies
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01 font 00 Just an additional thought: 'journey' implies
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0 Thanks, Lil, for your advice, and here I rewrite it again: 02 br
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00 Life on earth is but a brisk leg of myriad journeys of eternity; therefore, it's not worth being greedy, angry, arrogant, vindictive, and uncertain. 02 br
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00 "Journeys through eternity" is not what I want to get across; for me, life is eternal, endless, and going on and on. That's wh
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00 Life on earth is but a brisk leg of myriad journeys of eternity; therefore, it's not worth being greedy, angry, arrogant, vindictive, and uncertain. 02 br
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00 "Journeys through eternity" is not what I want to get across; for me, life is eternal, endless, and going on and on. That's wh
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