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Snuppelina Posted 11 years ago
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As part of modernization of the accelerator, it is planned to create a next-generation YYY separator.
1) Is it correct "as part of modernization..." . Can I say "within modernization project"?
2) Can I say "create" here, not development?
3) Do I need an indefinite or definite article prior to the separator's name (if I mention it for the first time)?
As part of modernization of the accelerator, it is planned to create a next-generation YYY separator.
1) Is it correct "as part of modernization..." . Can I say "within modernization project"?
2) Can I say "create" here, not development?
3) Do I need an indefinite or definite article prior to the separator's name (if I mention it for the first time)?
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1) If it is common in your workplace to assign Project names, then yes. However, if modernization is ongoing (all the time), any improvement is “a part of modernization”. 2) If the separator already is the name of something in use, and you are improving it without renaming it, then “ a next-generation separator” is being developed (from the old one).
- 1) If it is common in your workplace to assign Project names, then yes.
- However, if modernization is ongoing (all the time), any improvement is “a part of modernization”.
- 2) If the separator already is the name of something in use, and you are improving it without renaming it, then “ a next-generation separator” is being developed (from the old one).
- (Indefinite article)
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1) If it is common in your workplace to assign Project names, then yes. However, if modernization is ongoing (all the time), any improvement is “a part of modernization”.
2) If the separator already is the name of something in use, and you are improving it without renaming it, then “a next-generation separator” is being developed (from the old one). (Indefinite article)
2) If the separator already is the name of something in use, and you are improving it without renaming it, then “a next-generation separator” is being developed (from the old one). (Indefinite article)
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