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The breakthroughs in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world society over the last two centuries.Discuss this statement and give your opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.In recent times, the steps of science-technology have made a crucial contribution to the development of society. Although there is a school of thought that the significant marches of medical science might be considered the pinnacle of human life for about two hundred years, I hold an opposite opinion that those breakthroughs could contain some drawbacks towards human beings.Without any doubt, a series of dangerous diseases have been prevented or completely wiped out in the flow of history. For example, humans are likely to curb tuberculosis, which used to take many lives around the world for centuries. Thanks to medical breakthroughs, the average human life expectancy might be remarkably increased. When it comes to modern medical interventions, people tend to get better treatment and faster recovery than traditional methods like curing by herbs or acupuncture. Therefore, there is no denying the advantages that medical marches have brought.On the other hand, medical advances might also lead to thousands of negative aspects. It is also said that the more people develop medical science, the less humane people, due to ethical beliefs.  Many animals like mice, rabbits would be used to test not only on painful medical treatments but also on new medicines. Furthermore, the medical developments might lead to biological warfare that would no longer threaten all human races. If the authorities of the developed nations implement medical science to launch meaningless wars, they will end human history.In conclusion, medical science would play a crucial role in human development in the community. If the applications in medical science are not implemented for malicious/evil purposes, their use will make people's lives more prosperous.

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The breakthroughs in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world society over the last two centuries.

Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In recent times, the steps of science-technology have made a crucial contribution to the development of society. Although there is a school of thought that the significant marches of medical science might be considered the pinnacle of human life for about two hundred years, I hold an opposite opinion that those breakthroughs could contain some drawbacks towards human beings.

Without any doubt, a series of fatal diseases have been prevented or completely wiped out in the flow of history. For example, humans are likely to curb tuberculosis, which used to take many lives around the world for centuries. Thanks to medical breakthroughs, the average human life expectancy might be remarkably increased. When it comes to modern medical interventions, people tend to get better treatment and faster recovery than traditional methods like curing by herbs or acupuncture. Therefore, there is no denying the advantages that medical marches have brought.

On the other hand, medical advances might also lead to thousands of negative aspects. It is also said that the more people develop medical science, the less humane people, due to ethical beliefs. Many animals like mice, rabbits would be used to test not only on painful medical treatments but also on new drugs. Furthermore, the medical developments might lead to biological warfare that would no longer threaten all human races. If the authorities of the developed nations employ medical science to launch meaningless wars, they will put an end to human history.

In conclusion, medical science would play a crucial role in human development in the community. If the applications in medical science are not implemented for malicious purposes, their use will make people's lives more prosperous.

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In recent times, (Off-topic. the time frame in the task is 200 years. "Recent times" is much less than 200 years. Maybe it is a decade.) the steps of science-technology (wrong expression) have made a crucial contribution to the development of society. (I have no idea what "development of society" means. It is not the task.) Although there is a school of thought that the significant marches (Not a good phrase. The task is referring to vaccines, X-Rays and other types of non-invasive scans, the discovery of antibiotics, anesthetics, insulin, cancer treatments, increased safety and success of many types of surgery, and even the discovery that germs cause disease. Two hundred years ago, it was not uncommon for women to die in childbirth. Also, many children died before age five of contagious diseases. That rarely happens today.) of medical science might be considered the pinnacle of human life (wrong expression. This is more referring to the arts. ) for about two hundred years, I hold an opposite opinion that those breakthroughs could have ~~contain some~~ drawbacks towards human beings. ( I expect you to defend your statement that these medical advancements were bad for humanity.)

You do not support your arguments very well. It is not about some future warfare, but what happened in medical practice over the past 200 years.

Do you know that the president of the United States, James Garfield, died in 1881, less than 200 years ago? He was shot by an assassin, but the bullet did not kill him. It was not a fatal wound.

He died because his doctors, the best in the world, did not understand that germs caused infections. They did not wash their hands when they examined him.

Without any doubt, a series of fatal diseases have been prevented or completely wiped out ~~in the flow of history~~. For example, humans (wrong usage. Do not use "human" except in set phrases or in comparison to other species.) are likely to curb (wrong word) tuberculosis, which used to take many lives around the world for centuries. Thanks to medical breakthroughs, the ~~average human~~ life expectancy has ~~might be~~ remarkably increased. (In fact, it has doubled in the developed countries.) When it comes to modern medical interventions, people ~~tend to~~ get better treatment and faster recovery than traditional methods like curing by herbs or acupuncture. Therefore, there is no denying the advantages that medical marches (wrong word) have brought.

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