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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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School Task
We have a quality writing task (formal) and I was wondering if this introduction would be okay?
I am writing to you today to express my concerns about the energy efficiency of your school. In further paragraphs, I will explain what global warming is, what is causing it and what your school could do to help stop it.
Any help appreciated.
I am writing to you today to express my concerns about the energy efficiency of your school. In further paragraphs, I will explain what global warming is, what is causing it and what your school could do to help stop it.
Any help appreciated.
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Hi, I will explain what global warming is Don't you think the school authorities already know what global warming is? It sounds like you think they are stupid! It also sounds like you are not a member of the school, because you refer to it as 'your school'.
- Hi, I will explain what global warming is Don't you think the school authorities already know what global warming is?
- It sounds like you think they are stupid!
- It also sounds like you are not a member of the school, because you refer to it as 'your school'.
- If this is the case, you should explain why you are concerned about what the school should do.
- Clive
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Hi,
I will explain what global warming is
Don't you think the school authorities already know what global warming is? It sounds like you think they are stupid!
It also sounds like you are not a member of the school, because you refer to it as 'your school'. If this is the cas
I will explain what global warming is
Don't you think the school authorities already know what global warming is? It sounds like you think they are stupid!
It also sounds like you are not a member of the school, because you refer to it as 'your school'. If this is the cas
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