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Liton Das Posted 6 years ago
Grammar
School prospectus
Can you correct this page for me? It's the first page of our school prospectus.
WRITE DESCRIPTION HERE
WRITE DESCRIPTION HERE
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The first paragraph is a mess, so I redid it. I do not think "prospectus" is the right word, so I made it "summary". I don't know what it actually is because I can't see it.
- The first paragraph is a mess, so I redid it.
- I do not think "prospectus" is the right word, so I made it "summary".
- I don't know what it actually is because I can't see it.
- Dear parents, Welcome to Golden Peak Primary School.
- Choosing the right school for your child is a difficult decision for every parent, and this summary is designed to give you an overview of our school and show you what we can offer your child.
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The first paragraph is a mess, so I redid it. I do not think "prospectus" is the right word, so I made it "summary". I don't know what it actually is because I can't see it.
Dear parents,
Welcome to Golden Peak Primary School.
Choosing the right school for your child is a difficult decision for every parent, and this summary is designed to give you an overview of our school a
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