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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
School life
Could anybody correct these sentences for me?
(1) Our school advocate ________________(hope everyone changes their habits or do something to protest our environment ),so there are many kinds of plants in our school.
(2) I like to write sentences beside the mountain in the evening.(I put the because I refers to the mountain in our school.)
(3)The mountain in/on/at our school are greenish with tropical trees and animals.
(4)Further more, there is a beautiful waterfall and pond at the summit of it.
Many thanks in advance
(1) Our school advocate ________________(hope everyone changes their habits or do something to protest our environment ),so there are many kinds of plants in our school.
(2) I like to write sentences beside the mountain in the evening.(I put the because I refers to the mountain in our school.)
(3)The mountain in/on/at our school are greenish with tropical trees and animals.
(4)Further more, there is a beautiful waterfall and pond at the summit of it.
Many thanks in advance
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I'm not sure what you want to do with #1, but: (1) Our school advocates changing our habits or doing something else to protect our environment, so there are many kinds of plants in our school. (2) I like to write sentences on/under the hill in the evening. -- A school would have to be very, very big to have mountains; I think that yours has a hill.
- I'm not sure what you want to do with #1, but: (1) Our school advocates changing our habits or doing something else to protect our environment, so there are many kinds of plants in our school.
- (2) I like to write sentences on/under the hill in the evening.
- -- A school would have to be very, very big to have mountains; I think that yours has a hill.
- (3) The hill at our school is green with tropical trees and has many animals.
- (4) Furthermore , there is a beautiful fountain and pond at its summit.
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I'm not sure what you want to do with #1, but:
(1) Our school advocates changing our habits or doing something else to protect our environment, so there are many kinds of plants in our school.
(2) I like to write sentences on/under the hill in the evening. -- A school would have to be very, very big to have mountains; I think that yours has a hill.
(1) Our school advocates changing our habits or doing something else to protect our environment, so there are many kinds of plants in our school.
(2) I like to write sentences on/under the hill in the evening. -- A school would have to be very, very big to have mountains; I think that yours has a hill.
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