School assignment

hi all, for school i have to make a book report. Im Dutch and its for English class. Could you look at it and say some wrong sentences.

Thx
begin:

Antagonist: Lee Yung, A man with the disease cancer. He believes that the bones of a tiger (one of the protagonists) can heal him.



Characterization: Lila, she is a spiritual tiger that can transform into a human being. She can't talk human language. You do not read what she is thinking. Only her feelings, like joy.



Conflict: Lila, the protagonist lived in a zoo. The owners of the zoo had a deal with lee Yung to capture and kill all the tigers. At the night of the massacre the plan went totally wrong. Many of the Triad members were killed by the tigers. But also many tigers. There were still many members alive and Lila swore to kill all that were involved. one by one.



Climax: There were a few Climaxes in this book, but all of them weren't that spectacular. The final showdown wasn't really a climax but at the beginning where the Triad members were capturing the tigers was pretty big.



Exposition: The book is Fiction but it happens in our time. The place where it takes place changes many times. First in a zoo, sometimes in the nature and sometimes in the city or in a house.



Falling Action: She decided to kill all the Triad members that killed her friends and family. The consequences are that she could be killed by Lee Yung. And later the consequence was to give up her spiritual gifts.



Genre: The genre is Fiction because it isn't possible to transform into a cat or reversed.



Metaphor: "The remaining sheep scattered and tripped like girls stumbling in the meadow." He is compared to girls that were stumbling in the meadow because he was stumbling.



Point of View: The story is told by the author because you don't read the minds of the characters. It was told in he - she - it form.



Protagonist: The Protagonist is Lila as I told before. She is a Spiritual tiger that can transform into a human girl. Some other main characters are Steve, a boy that loves The tiger zoo and later on he also turns into a tiger. And of course Lee Yung, the "bad guy".



Resolution: Lila decide to remove the spiritual out of her body so she can't transform into a girl anymore and Lee Yung can't use her anymore.



Rising Action: At first Lee Yung got the disease cancer and he decides to kill those tigers. Then it went wrong and many tigers escape. Lila the spiritual tiger decide to kill all the Triad members.



Theme: The book has many themes. It is sad because many tigers dies and at the end she has to remove her magical spirit. But also action becaus
e there are a lot of fighting scenes. (that explains the dead of the tigers)

end