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Springmeans Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

school admission

Hi, I am helping someone to write her cover letter to this high school she is applying for. It's in overseas and she is in year 9 at her current school. Can you kindly fix my intro? And perhaps some key ideas that are often required in the body? Thanks.

I am writing to draw your attention that I wish to apply for admission at the 10th grade for the next academic year. I am therefore sending you this application along with copies of my current grade academic transcription for your consideration.
  

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Dear ***, I am writing to draw your attention that I wish to apply for admission to the 10th grade for the next academic year. I am therefore sending you this application along with copies of my current grade academic transcription for your consideration . Please find attached a copy of my current academic transcript for your consideration.

  • Dear ***, I am writing to draw your attention that I wish to apply for admission to the 10th grade for the next academic year.
  • I am therefore sending you this application along with copies of my current grade academic transcription for your consideration .
  • Please find attached a copy of my current academic transcript for your consideration.
  • For additional information about the body of a letter, you can see several examples at the writing forum.
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Dear ***,
I am writing to draw your attention that
I wish to apply for admission to the 10th grade for the next academic year. I am therefore sending you this application along with copies of my current grade academic transcription for your consideration.Please find attached a copy of my current academic transcript for your co
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Thanks alot.
It helped.

I have written up the rest and uploaded for someone to look at for me.
I am new in this forum so I wasn't sure if i posted it in the correct category?
Can't help though, because I wouldn't know how to change it.

Thanks John.

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