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PreciousJones Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

School

I felt uncomfortable driving a gas guzzling German vehicle around school, dodging bicyclists left and right as If I were the only axis in a World World II film.

Please proofread. Thank you!
  

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Change bicyclists to cyclists . You have misunderstood the word axis . Rover

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  • Change bicyclists to cyclists .
  • You have misunderstood the word axis .
  • Rover
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Change bicyclists to cyclists.

You have misunderstood the word axis.

Rover
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Rover_KEChange bicyclists to cyclists.You have misunderstood the word axis.Rover
I felt uncomfortable driving a gas guzzling German vehicle around school, dodging cyclists left and right as If I were the only Axis power in a World World II film.

Is this better?

Please make it so that it makes sense and is grammatical.

Thank you!
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