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Vao_mang357 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Scholarship letter proof reading

Hi guys! I going to apply this letter. I need some help with proof reading with. Could u guys please correct mistakes (grammar, idea, ...) in my letter? I really appreciate it.

Dear Madam,

I am grateful for your consideration the previous semesters. I am writing this letter to maintain the 100% tuition fee Scholarship for the next semester.

Last semester, I literally worked tirelessly in 16 AAS and 3 GE credits. Throughout last Fall semester, I had worked as hard as I possibly can to pursuit the interest and inspiration these courses brought. Taking Programing Fundamentals and English for IT course did a great deal in intensifying my interest in the IT line. As the semester passed, I got 5 A grades over six courses taken. That has raised my AAS cumulative to new peak of 3.7.

Besides, I participated in Halloween activities that have given me many practical experiences. On the one hand, last Halloween gave me a change to approach factual knowledge in processes of organizing an even. On the other hand, it gave me memorable moment with friends, rushing around hours for advertising, enjoying racing against time. As it did not result so well, I have learned from that the taste of failure in a new aspect. There are also immeasurable experiences in friendship, competition, ect that open my eyes to see life in a different way.

Outside academic works and above activities, I take a new habit of getting early in the morning. Getting up at 5 a.m., I spend some time for a short run, and enjoy playing badminton. This is an effective way which not only benefits my health but also make my mind peace to get activated for a new day. This habit has balanced my life.

There is no word to describe how the scholarship valuable for me. I promise I will try my best to be a deserved scholarship keeper.

I have gone a very long way since the day I got into college, and that could not have been done without our consideration. I am extremely grateful for your support.

thank you for your consideration.
  
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