0Dear All,02br 02br 00I need to send a motivation letter to apply to a scholarship for a PhD, which is presented below. I would appreciate if you could help me with this by perusing it for me and giving me your opinion.02br 02br 00Many thanks in advance.02br 02br 00By the way, thanks and congratulations for this forum.02br 02br 00Regards,02br 02br 00Joana02br 02br 00++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++02br 02br 00I am writing to apply for the Fulbright Grant for Doctoral Study in Environmental Studies/Sustainable Development in the US for the academic Year 2007/2008.02br 02br 00I graduated in Environmental Engineering in 1999 from XXXX University, Spain. During my studies I became very interested in sustainable development, its principles and associated tools that allow the evaluation of potential risks and their prevention. 02br 02br 00In the context of sustainability, during my final year, I worked directly with a local authority (Xxxxx Council, Spain) to develop its “Sustainable Observatory” based on a set of indicators which covered environmental, social and economic areas. The “Observatory”01b00 02b00proved to be a very important tool for their Local Agenda XXI, helping the decision makers to evaluate their local development plans, strategies and policies. 02br 02br 00Once I completed my degree, I focused my professional career on the development of quality and environmental management systems in companies related to the construction industry. As I have always been involved with this particular industry, I became aware of the bivalency between “environment and built environment” and became conscious that construction has the potential to cause severe impacts on the environment but on the other hand, it has the ability to enhance environmental health, biodiversity and quality of life when applying the appropriate approaches and tools. 02br 02br 00Between 199X and 200X, I worked in Spain as a consultant and developed quality and environmental management systems according to ISO 9001 and ISO 14001 standards in ready mixed concrete and quarrying companies. 02br 02br 00In 200X, I went to England, where I currently live, to do a Masters Degree in Quality Engineering at South Bank University. When developing my Masters´ dissertation, I applied my research skills in a real case study in a company manufacturing01b00 02b00a very well-known ready mixed brand within United Kingdom. It was a real challenge and a very interesting experience for me, which convinced me to stay here to reinforce my international experience in the construction industry. 02br 02br 00Since 200X, I have been living in Birmingham working as a QE (Quality and Environmental) Manager in an Engineering Consultancy Company. Its main clients are local authorities and its services include: design and maintenance of highways; design, maintenance and inspection of highways structures; and development of regeneration projects. 02br 02br 00Dealing with this type of clients/entities and projects, I have realised how important all the parties are (from planers and local authorities to designers and contractors) in terms of making sustainability happen and how difficult it is due to the lack of appropriate or available tools and factual data. This has reinforced my interest in this topic, to which I intend to contribute and get involved as a researcher. Hence, I intend to develop a PhD thesis01b00 02b00related to issues of sustainability and associated tools/practical techniques which may enhance the capacity of policy-makers, managers, planners, public authorities and enterprises to identify from a range of options, the most effective in promoting and achieving the level of sustainability suited to their own circumstances, maximising the benefits in economic, social and environmental terms. 02br 02br 00There is no doubt that American Universities and their outstanding researchers have proven to lead sustainable development studies, giving unique contributions to the environmental risk management, urban planning and sustainable growth to the entire academic world. They have also had the ability to establish impressive links with other relevant actors such as technical professional associations, private sector, regional institutions and civil society, putting sustainable development concepts into practice. For these reasons, I would like to have the opportunity to develop my PhD in this incredible country, where along with opportunities for my intellectual and professional growth I would have the possibility to meet and work with people of the host country and those from other places of the world, sharing professional and hopefully creative insights. 02br 02br 00Hence, having the Fulbright Grant, I would be given the possibility to research with the best academic institutions of the world and reinforce my knowledge in environment, built environment and associated planning and risk management tools necessary to achieve a sustainable development. I would then be able to use that knowledge on the companies and projects for which I am and I will work for, influence their decision making and hopefully contribute to the sustainable development of the world where all of us live!0-
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02br 02br 00I graduated in Environmental Engineering in 1999 from *** 00. During my studies I became very interested in sustainable development, its principles and associated tools and 01b 00how these02b 00 allow 01b 00for02b 00 the evaluation of potential risks and their prevention. 02br 02br 00In the context of sustainability, during my final year, I worked directly with a local authority (*** 00) to develop its “Sustainable Observatory” 01b 00[01font 00explain what this was02font 00]02b 00based on a set of indicators which covered environmental, social and economic areas.
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02br 02br 00I graduated in Environmental Engineering in 1999 from *** 00.
During my studies I became very interested in sustainable development, its principles and associated tools and 01b 00how these02b 00 allow 01b 00for02b 00 the evaluation of potential risks and their prevention.
02br 02br 00In the context of sustainability, during my final year, I worked directly with a local authority (*** 00) to develop its “Sustainable Observatory” 01b 00[01font 00explain what this was02font 00]02b 00based on a set of indicators which covered environmental, social and economic areas.
The “Observatory”01b 00 02b 00proved to be a very important tool for their Local Agenda ***, helping [01b 00the deleted02b 00]decision makers to evaluate their local development plans, strategies and policies.
02br 02br 01b 00After completing02b 00 my degree, I focused my professional career on the development of quality and 01b 00on02b 00 environmental management systems in companies related to the construction industry.
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0Anon, here are some suggestions for your letter, shown in bold, - Nick02br 02br 00I am writing to apply for the Fulbright Grant for 01b00a02b00 Doctoral Study in Environmental Studies/Sustainable Development in the 00 for the academic Year 2007/2008.02br 02br 00I graduated in Environmental Engineering in 1999 from *** 00. Du