Scholarship essay for NTU: Describe, in less than 300 words, the values and beliefs you hold strongly to. Please provide examples of how you have demonstrated these in your actions.

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A value that I hold strongly to is dedication. I think it is imperative to be devoted in my deeds once I have decided to do it. If not, I wouldn’t even start doing it and later give up halfway. Thus, I always consider carefully to ensure my dedication before embarking on any huge endeavours. In secondary one, my teacher recommended me to study the Higher Chinese Language (HCL). Knowing that extra effort must be put in to tackle Chinese at a higher difficulty level, I took it after promising myself that I’ll do my best, although I could drop it if I don’t do well. During the start of secondary two, I was disheartened at my poorer performance in HCL compared to normal Chinese. Thereafter, I tried improving my marks by doing extra readings and borrowing notes for what I’ve missed out for secondary one HCL. Ultimately, I’m contented that my dedication has allowed me to achieve the Best in HCL award that year.

In addition, integrity and justice are also values that I hold dear to. They were the motivation to what I did during a test in secondary two. It was a test in home economics, where I’ve witnessed two of my classmates cheating. Although it was a small test, I was annoyed by their dishonesty and injustice they did to others who studied hard for the test. Thus, I mustered up my courage to report them of cheating to my teacher. Despite facing the displeasure of my classmates, I am not regretful of my action as my teacher praised me for being brave, standing up for my values. This incident has further reinforced my values of integrity and justice.

Upholding these values and beliefs, I hope that I could add value as a student in NTU.