Scene to be done using best action verb in present tense
Chase is on for Veronica & Suzan. Finally, they manage to interrupt them with their cars.
Both Michael and Paul get down out of their cars and walk towards the girl's car. The girls look confident and stunning with cunning looks on their faces.
Both reach the two sides of the car. They open both sides of the doors simultaneously and hold the girls and plant a smooch. Paul picks Suzan up and takes her to the back seat and Michael takes the driving seat with Veronica on the side and again a deep smooch goes on between Michael and Veronica on one side and Paul and Suzan on the back seat.
Paul
Who wants the first ride then?
Girls scream loudly in affirmation. Michael pulls the gear and they hit the road at a very high speed.
Michael
(To one of the girls) you're gonna do the sexy sat-nav voice?
PAUL Do they even speak English?
VERONICA
Sat-nav...interesting..lets do it.
Michael looks at Paul in confusion, Paul in doubt was hesitant to reply,
SUZAN Wanna go for a ride then do you?
PAUL Always.
VERONIC
Follow my directions then.
Veronica moves across and eases herself onto Michael's lap. For a moment Michael's eyes stare into Veronica's. Headlights of an oncoming car cause him to face forward. Veronica closes her eyes as Michael spins the steering wheel aggressively.
The cars pass with factions to spare. Veronica goes little down on chest of Michael. Now Michael could see the road he is driving on.
VERONICA (Sensuous voice) Keep going straight.
She licks his chest center, further to his throat and further until the chin.
VERONICA (Sensuous voice) At round about take first exit
Michael takes the first exit at the roundabout. She continues further to left jaw line from the chin. Then she reaches the end of the left jaw line.
VERONICA (Sensuous voice) Take first left and you are on the by pass.
She following her own words goes left with the lips goes below the left ears(is a by pass) leading to sloppy lane on the right.
VERONICA (Sensuous voice) Take a right after 15 yards.(kissing through the ears going down until the tip)
At the back seat of the car Suzan is kissing Paul. Both Michael and Paul are shocked and scared as Michael looses control of the wheel and avoids an accident by a fraction of a second.
VERONICA
(Sensuous voice) Keep left and follow the lane and at junction take first left.(from left ears follow the jaw line and reach the lips)
Veronica reaches the middle of the lips.
VERONICA (Deeply breathing,tempting voice) Center lane. Drive straight. Put your foot down big boy.
She kisses him on the lips. Michael's left foot presses the accelerator hard. His view is totally blocked, struggling to keep his hands on the wheels and eyes on the road, nervous and frighten by this move, trying to resist Veronica. The car is going very fast and wheels are screeching. Veronica finally lets Michael's lips go.
VERONICA Emergency stop. You have reached your destination.
Michael suddenly brakes hard, and car stops at once with a screeching noise.
Suzan lying on the top of Paul at the back seat and Veronica leaning on the drive wheel sitting on the lap of Michael. Both Michael and Paul give a nervous smile and then all four of them laugh out loud.
MICHAEL Fuck me.
They are at a private villa. Loads of cars are parked there. Michael parks the car and keeps the key in his pocket. Mild sound of techno music coming from the villa. As they start walking to the villa the music goes wild.
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Hello Mate my question is to correct the grammer in the above mentioned Scene, ie i have to write it in present tense, using best possible descriptive action verb.