Hi Cutie1 -- welcome to the forum. You might want to look around and see what kind of questions we answer here. If you would like to post your five paragraphs on The Scarlet Ibis we will be happy to check your grammar, but please don't ask us to do your homework for you. (Unless you're willing to come to my house and do my dishes while I write your essay -- then maybe we can work someth
I suggest that you work together with your teacher on this assignment, especially on basic research techniques. While you're at it, you could probably use some brushing up on capitalization and punctuation rules.