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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

Say hallo to old friend and introduce a product we have

Dear All

I am an Indonesian, sorry if my english was not good. I would like to write a say hello email to my old friend from Sydney. Could anyone help to correct this my email.

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Hi Enrico

How are you today, I am Kholid, I am the Juanda Immigratiion IT support. Hope you are not forgot with me.

I got opportunity to visit Australia in next few month, how do you think if i visit to your home.

By the way, someone let me know that Indonesian goverment has receiving border management system from Ausi, is itcomes from your company.

If you don't mind how do you think if my team would like to become as your partner either as the software supplier or implementation support. I have work with border control management system software since 2 years ago, i believe that my application would be suitable for Indonesian culture.

I travelling experience since Medan to Merauke and know more about the condition of Indonesian boder.

If you interesting with my product, i can send further detail about what we have in future email.

Thanks for your kind attention, and your reply would be appreciated.

Best Regards

Kholid
  
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