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4) We must compost organic waste. It will help in two ways: reduce pollution and it makes a great natural fertiliser.
5) Reducing the use of pesticides by using the beneficial insects that can control pets population.
6) If we use paper or cloth bags instead of polythene bags, it will control pollution.
Are these points written in natural English? Please help me make them natural.
Thanks in advance.
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The point in a list should be parallel structures. Yours are not. 4) We must compost organic waste.
- The point in a list should be parallel structures.
- Yours are not.
- 4) We must compost organic waste.
- It will help in two ways: reduce pollution and it makes make a great natural fertiliser.
- (structure: full sentence) 5) Reducing the use of pesticides by using the beneficial insects that can control pets (wrong form.
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The point in a list should be parallel structures. Yours are not.
4) We must compost organic waste. It will help in two ways: reduce pollution and it makes make a great natural fertiliser. (structure: full sentence)
5) Reducing the use of pesticides by using the beneficial insects that can control
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