Saury/chestnuts
Please help me make the paragraph below sound natural. Thanks a lot.
Autumn is the harvest season, and it is a great time to spend quality time with family and eat good food. Speaking of autumn, you have no reason to ignore the goodies, such as crabs, chestnuts, saury, and so on. It is also the ideal season to enjoy crab as the taste of crab is at its best this time of year. As autumn comes, my dad would buy me a bag of in-season chestnuts all the time. I like the light ones with a little sweet taste. Having a cup of tea and some desserts with my family while the wind blows is the most enjoyable thing in the world.
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Although there are few grammatical mistakes, the text does not flow smoothly. Here is an example of turning the sentences into a story. Autumn is the harvest season, and it is a great time to spend quality time with family and eat good food.
- Although there are few grammatical mistakes, the text does not flow smoothly.
- Here is an example of turning the sentences into a story.
- Autumn is the harvest season, and it is a great time to spend quality time with family and eat good food.
- Speaking of the food , (note the flow from sentence 1 to sentence 2.
- ) you can savor special goodies, especially crabs and chestnuts.
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Although there are few grammatical mistakes, the text does not flow smoothly. Here is an example of turning the sentences into a story.
Autumn is the harvest season, and it is a great time to spend quality time with family and eat good food. Speaking of the food, (note the flow from sentence 1 to sentence 2. You are going to talk about the food.) you can savor spec
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