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KMagic Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Saturday - My bad day

Today is the last school day of this week. It is a really bad day.
On last tuesday, in a Math class, I was sitting and doing the exercises, a friend of me told me to buy for him a pen because he didn't know where to buy. And I said that I would buy for him tomorrow. But the class president wrote my name into her notebook because I was talking in class! This morning, my teacher saw her notebook and make me ( with some bodies in my class) promise that we will never do it again. Even more, she made me told my father to meet her on this Monday. I haven't told my father yet. I am scaried now. I guess my father will be angry about this. Do you have any advice for me?
  

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Today is the last school day of this week. It is a really bad day. On L ast T uesday, in a Math class, I was sitting and doing the exercises, (This is comma splice - this is incorrect.

  • Today is the last school day of this week.
  • It is a really bad day.
  • On L ast T uesday, in a Math class, I was sitting and doing the exercises, (This is comma splice - this is incorrect.
  • ) a friend of mine me told me to buy for him a pen for him because he didn't know where to buy one .
  • And I said that I would buy one for him tomorrow.
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Today is the last school day of this week. It is a really bad day.
On Last Tuesday, in a Math class, I was sitting and doing the exercises, (This is comma splice - this is incorrect. Write: Last Tuesday when I was in a Math class, sitting and doing the exercises, ....) a friend of mine me told me to buy for him a pen
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Many thanks. Yesterday my father met the teacher and he wasn't angry. In the bad things, there are some lucky things^^
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Very nice i love it

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