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Vctraung Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Sales person pressure?
Dear All,
"Stays in places with round trips in Myanma (BURMA) each with a particular themes for your family (group), and of course with reasonable rates. We have various proposed programs and rates."
Above sentence, I don't like that much to sell tour inbound? could you advice better sentence for me?
Victor Aung
"Stays in places with round trips in Myanma (BURMA) each with a particular themes for your family (group), and of course with reasonable rates. We have various proposed programs and rates."
Above sentence, I don't like that much to sell tour inbound? could you advice better sentence for me?
Victor Aung
Top answer
Hello, Victor - and welcome to English Forums. Something like this, perhaps: Round trip holidays/adventures in Myanmar, with themes to suit your group and of course at reasonable rates. We have a wide range of programs and rates.
- Hello, Victor - and welcome to English Forums.
- Something like this, perhaps: Round trip holidays/adventures in Myanmar, with themes to suit your group and of course at reasonable rates.
- We have a wide range of programs and rates.
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Hello, Victor - and welcome to English Forums. Something like this, perhaps:
Round trip holidays/adventures in Myanmar, with themes to suit your group and of course at reasonable rates. We have a wide range of programs and rates.
Round trip holidays/adventures in Myanmar, with themes to suit your group and of course at reasonable rates. We have a wide range of programs and rates.
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