Hi all
Ive just wrote this business letter and would be extremeley grateful if anyone could have a look over it and see what you think:
Thanks for your time
J
Letter:
Dear
(Company name / Contacts name)My name is
(my name) I am the Managing Director of
(my company).We specialize solely in LED lighting, enabling us to focus all our efforts into producing high quality LED lamps at a competitive price per unit.
We have purchased samples of the LED lamps you currently sell to compare and are pleased to confirm our lamps have;
- A greater lumen output,
- Longer lives,
- Wider range of colours,
- Are more aesthetically pleasing
- And can be provided to you at a much lower price per unit enabling higher profit margins for (prospective buyers company name)
We would enjoy the opportunity to send you some samples and more information about our products.
I look forward to hearing from you and begin a long and prosperous future working with
(prospective buyers company name).
Kind regards
(my name) (my company)(my contact number)(my email address and website)