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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Salary increment letter check
With due respect it is stated that I Mr. Masih Ur Rahman have the honor and great pleasure to work in Al Marwan Group of Companies and have much pleasure to work as Secretary under the kind supervision of Mr. Jamil Eid Qaqish from whom I learnt a lot which further I am utilizing for the interests of the Company. By the grace of Allah, from the beginning I am working with full satisfaction of my Manager and the nature of my work deserve me for an increment in my salary.
I therefore earnestly request your kind honor to look to the matter with kind heart and grant me an increment as much as possible.
I and my family members will forever be thankful and will pray for the good gesture and success of the organization.
Sir I am submitting this application for salary increment please guide me if there is any correction
I therefore earnestly request your kind honor to look to the matter with kind heart and grant me an increment as much as possible.
I and my family members will forever be thankful and will pray for the good gesture and success of the organization.
Sir I am submitting this application for salary increment please guide me if there is any correction
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By AmE and BrE standards, most of your letter is unacceptable, and I have stroked though those parts: With due respect it is stated that I Mr. Masih Ur Rahman have the honor and great pleasure to work in the Al Marwan Group of Companies and have much pleasure to work as Secretary under the kind supervision of Mr. Jamil Eid Qaqish from whom I learnt a lot.
- By AmE and BrE standards, most of your letter is unacceptable, and I have stroked though those parts: With due respect it is stated that I Mr.
- Masih Ur Rahman have the honor and great pleasure to work in the Al Marwan Group of Companies and have much pleasure to work as Secretary under the kind supervision of Mr.
- Jamil Eid Qaqish from whom I learnt a lot.
- which further I am utilizing for the interests of the Company.
- By the grace of Allah, from the beginning I am working with full satisfaction of my Manager and the nature of my work deserve me for an increment in my salary.
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By AmE and BrE standards, most of your letter is unacceptable, and I have stroked though those parts:
With due respect it is stated that I Mr. Masih Ur Rahman have the honor and great pleasure to work in the Al Marwan Group of Companies and have much pleasure to work as Secretary under the kind supervision of Mr.
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Hi Anonymous
You have written the letter in typical Pakistani/Indian style. I also used to write like this until I met MM. Where are you from?
Tom
You have written the letter in typical Pakistani/Indian style. I also used to write like this until I met MM. Where are you from?
Tom
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With due respect it is stated that I Mr. Toney have the honor and great pleasure to work in Genetco and have much pleasure to work as Secretary under the kind Engineer of Mr. Shooker from whom I learnt a lot which further I am utilizing for the interests of the Company. By the grace of Allah, from the beginning I am working with full satisfaction of my Manager and the nature of my work deserve m
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Please re-write your letter along the guidelines I have indicated in my previous post (above) and re-post your new draft.
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Me and my family members will forever be thankful and will pray for the good gesture and success of the organization.
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My family members and I will always be grateful and wish for the success of the organization.
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Changing the "I" to "me" does not represent a substantial improvement.
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26th August 2012
The Chairman
ARUJ TV (PVT) LTD.,
Lahore.
Dear Sir,
SUBJECT: ANNUAL SALARY INCREMENT
Referring to the above matter, I kindly request for a salary increment I have a baby to take care So, I have to pay more.
1. Maid for baby Monthly Charges Rs. 8,000/- (9:00 am to 7:00 pm)
2. Maid for home Rs. 4,000/-
3. My Maintenance Rs. 5,000/-
The Chairman
ARUJ TV (PVT) LTD.,
Lahore.
Dear Sir,
SUBJECT: ANNUAL SALARY INCREMENT
Referring to the above matter, I kindly request for a salary increment I have a baby to take care So, I have to pay more.
1. Maid for baby Monthly Charges Rs. 8,000/- (9:00 am to 7:00 pm)
2. Maid for home Rs. 4,000/-
3. My Maintenance Rs. 5,000/-
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26 August 2012
Chairman
ARUJ TV (PVT) LTD.,
Lahore
Dear Sir,
SUBJECT: ANNUAL SALARY INCREMENT
I would like to request a salary increment because I now have a baby to take care of, and I have additional expenses:
1. Maid for baby monthly Rs. 8,000/- (9:00 am to 7:00 pm)
2. Maid for home Rs. 4,000/-
3. My maintena
Chairman
ARUJ TV (PVT) LTD.,
Lahore
Dear Sir,
SUBJECT: ANNUAL SALARY INCREMENT
I would like to request a salary increment because I now have a baby to take care of, and I have additional expenses:
1. Maid for baby monthly Rs. 8,000/- (9:00 am to 7:00 pm)
2. Maid for home Rs. 4,000/-
3. My maintena
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RSir,
It has been a pleasure working for this esteemed company for the last ten years. I have always labeled myself as a professional and I am always keen to stay on top of my duties and task. Nowadays, the high cost of living wants to give additional financial support to my family. Every month I have to go to check up for cancer treatment. Unfortunately, my medical insurance card does not su
It has been a pleasure working for this esteemed company for the last ten years. I have always labeled myself as a professional and I am always keen to stay on top of my duties and task. Nowadays, the high cost of living wants to give additional financial support to my family. Every month I have to go to check up for cancer treatment. Unfortunately, my medical insurance card does not su
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