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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Salary Increment Application

hello,
I want to summit this application, please help and check if it's is well written.
thank you.

Dear Sir,

It’s a pleasure to contact you. Before I delve in to the core purpose of my letter. I would like to express my delight of being part of this esteemed company. I never felt more professionally dedicated in my life than I did now. I am grateful for the opportunity to work here and I really do enjoy it.

To return the favor, I have always given the best of my abilities in this position and I always worked hard to make sure my performance stays rising.
As you are aware, I do handling tasks that are not part of my job description but I am perfectly fine with it.

The reason I am able to write such letter. Having said so, I can’t help but to kindly draw your attention to some of the variables that are changing outside the perimeters of our offices.
There has been a significant increase in the cost of living lately. The cost of living has become very high, with price raised in food and transport. This matter is unfortunately
out of our control which I feel difficult to adjust with my existing salary.
Sir, I view this increase in responsibilities as an act of trust in my abilities and believe in my potential. I am really working hard for the benefit of our company, I do all work which am told to do.
Though is not always the work of sale representative.
Thank you and I sincerely anticipate your favorable action on the matter.
  

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Dear Sir, It’s It has been a pleasure to contact you. Before I delve in to the core purpose of my letter. I would like to express my delight of being be part of this esteemed company.

  • Dear Sir, It’s It has been a pleasure to contact you.
  • Before I delve in to the core purpose of my letter.
  • I would like to express my delight of being be part of this esteemed company.
  • I have never felt more professionally dedicated in my lif e.
  • than I did now.
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Dear Sir,

It’s It has been a pleasure to contact you. Before I delve in to the core purpose of my letter. I would like to express my delight of being be part of this esteemed company. I have never felt more professionally dedicated in my life. than I did now. I am grateful for the opportunity to work here and I really do enjoy i
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Dear Mr [surname]

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