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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Salary increment
Can anybody who has the kindness to read the below said rectify the mistakes please??
Dear Sir,
SUBJECT: REQUEST LETTER
I, the undersigned, SIDDIKKA, hereby would like to inform you that I have been working in the aforesaid company and I’m in the completion of seven years of my service at present. The monthly salary that I get from this company is the only income for me and my family and that is insufficient for my own expense here and the expenses of my dependents who live in my home country. During my employment tenure I've never expressed any reluctance to my accountability. On this occasion, I sorely request you to either provide the basic salary more apart from my present salary or terminate my contract without renewing afterward.
I would be very grateful for the entire contributions you have made to my personal and professional development once you provide the above-mentioned or not.
Thanking you,
Dear Sir,
SUBJECT: REQUEST LETTER
I, the undersigned, SIDDIKKA, hereby would like to inform you that I have been working in the aforesaid company and I’m in the completion of seven years of my service at present. The monthly salary that I get from this company is the only income for me and my family and that is insufficient for my own expense here and the expenses of my dependents who live in my home country. During my employment tenure I've never expressed any reluctance to my accountability. On this occasion, I sorely request you to either provide the basic salary more apart from my present salary or terminate my contract without renewing afterward.
I would be very grateful for the entire contributions you have made to my personal and professional development once you provide the above-mentioned or not.
Thanking you,
Top answer
Could you please rewrite the following in simpler language? It's not very clear! "expressed any reluctance to my accountability".
- Could you please rewrite the following in simpler language?
- It's not very clear!
- "expressed any reluctance to my accountability".
- "I would be very grateful for the entire contributions you have made to my personal and professional development once you provide the above-mentioned or not".
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Could you please rewrite the following in simpler language? It's not very clear! 
"expressed any reluctance to my accoun
"expressed any reluctance to my accoun
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