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Curiouscutebuoy Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Salary Increment
I recently got promoted to Foreman and I've been given to understand that I'll get only 10% salary increment, but I strongly believe I should get 15% at least. Following is the letter I've prepared. Kindly have a look and advise your views.
Sir,
Following was my Salary Structure as Technician:
Basic Salary - 4000
It is my understanding that I will be given a 10% salary increase (which is AED 400) for the current position I have been drafted into. I humbly solicit your support to grant a 15% increase - AED 600 only, by which my Basic Salary would be AED 4600; a fair Basic Salary for Foreman post.
Taking into account of the promotion from Technician to Foreman position and considering nature of the job & higher level of responsibilities entrusted to me, the increase I request hereby is minimal.
Counting upon your kind consideration.
I remain, Yours sincerely
Name
Sir,
Following was my Salary Structure as Technician:
Basic Salary - 4000
It is my understanding that I will be given a 10% salary increase (which is AED 400) for the current position I have been drafted into. I humbly solicit your support to grant a 15% increase - AED 600 only, by which my Basic Salary would be AED 4600; a fair Basic Salary for Foreman post.
Taking into account of the promotion from Technician to Foreman position and considering nature of the job & higher level of responsibilities entrusted to me, the increase I request hereby is minimal.
Counting upon your kind consideration.
I remain, Yours sincerely
Name
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curiouscutebuoy I recently got promoted to Foreman and I've been given to understand that I'll get only 10% salary increment, but I strongly believe I should get 15% at least. Following is the letter I've prepared. Kindly have a look and advise your views.
- curiouscutebuoy I recently got promoted to Foreman and I've been given to understand that I'll get only 10% salary increment, but I strongly believe I should get 15% at least.
- Following is the letter I've prepared.
- Kindly have a look and advise your views.
- Sir, Following was my Salary Structure as Technician: Basic Salary - 4000 It is my understanding that I will be given a 10% salary increase (which is AED 400) for the current position I have been drafted into.
- I humbly solicit your support to grant a 15% increase - AED 600 only, by which my Basic Salary would be AED 4600; a fair Basic Salary for Foreman post.
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curiouscutebuoyI recently got promoted to Foreman and I've been given to understand that I'll get only 10% salary increment, but I strongly believe I should get 15% at least. Following is the letter I've prepared. Kindly have a look and advise your views.
Sir,
Following was my Salary Structure as Technician:
Basic Salary - 4000
It is my understanding that
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Dear Mr. Philip,
Thanks for your quick response, really appreciate that.
To conclude a letter being written to the Boss, which one of the following would be better:
Counting upon your kind consideration.
I remain, Yours sincerely,
Name
OR
Counting upon your kind consideration.
I remain, Yours truly,
Name
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Thanks for your quick response, really appreciate that.
To conclude a letter being written to the Boss, which one of the following would be better:
Counting upon your kind consideration.
I remain, Yours sincerely,
Name
OR
Counting upon your kind consideration.
I remain, Yours truly,
Name
O
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All are rather stilted and old-fashioned for a letter to your boss (and 'faithfully' is reserved for unknown recipients anyway). Keep it simple:
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
[signed]
All are rather stilted and old-fashioned for a letter to your boss (and 'faithfully' is reserved for unknown recipients anyway). Keep it simple:
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
[signed]
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Normally I don't add anything after Mr. M has spoken, but since you sente me a PM regarding the letter, I'll just say that I concur with him on this.
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