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Sarcandra Posted 14 years ago

Saint Francis and the Sow

Just wanted to share my favorite poem.

Saint Francis and the Sow
By Galway Kinnell

The bud
stands for all things,
even for those things that don't flower,
for everything flowers, from within, of self-blessing;
though sometimes it is necessary
to reteach a thing its loveliness,
to put a hand on its brow
of the flower
and retell it in words and in touch
it is lovely
until it flowers again from within, of self-blessing;
as Saint Francis
put his hand on the creased forehead
of the sow, and told her in words and in touch
blessings of earth on the sow, and the sow
began remembering all down her thick length,
from the earthen snout all the way
through the fodder and slops to the spiritual curl of the tail,
from the hard spininess spiked out of the spine
down through the great broken heart
to the sheer blue milken dreaminess spurting and shuddering
from the fourteen teats into the fourteen mouths sucking and blowing beneath them:
the long, perfect loveliness of sow.
  

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Interesting. Do you like it because of its technique or because of its message? I find the composition rather uninteresting, not very poetic, but its message is affecting.

  • Interesting.
  • Do you like it because of its technique or because of its message?
  • I find the composition rather uninteresting, not very poetic, but its message is affecting.
  • Here is one of my favorite poems solely because of the poetic technique: The Seafarer (From the early Anglo-Saxon text) May I for my own self song's truth reckon, Journey's jargon, how I in harsh days Hardship endured oft.
  • Bitter breast-cares have I abided, Known on my keel many a care's hold, And dire sea-surge, and there I oft spent Narrow nightwatch nigh the ship's head While she tossed close to cliffs.
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Interesting. Do you like it because of its technique or because of its message? I find the composition rather uninteresting, not very poetic, but its message is affecting.

Here is one of my favorite poems solely because of the poetic technique:

The Seafarer

(From the early Anglo-Saxon text)

May I for my own self song's truth reckon,
Journey's jargon, how I in ha
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Mister MicawberInteresting. Do you like it because of its technique or because of its message?
Hi Mister Micawber. Because of the message and because I wouldn't have thought of equating a sow with a flower in bloom. The poet made it work.

Thanks for sharing one of your favorite poems. I'll have to read it again, though, to understand it.

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