Your link leads to a 500 server error. I agree with C, but #2 is not a native composition.
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As a sad and melancholy person would do, she became critical.
So the melancholy girl wandered through those long galleries, ... wondering what had become of the splendor that used to beam upon her from those walls. She grew sadly critical, and condemned almost everything that she was wont to admire.