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Najd Posted 20 years ago
Sad eyes of mine
Sad eyes of mine
I proms you will be fine
This pain must go away
Caz my heart is here to stay
I'm going to keep you save
No more of that constant crave
The world is calling you now
And we will find it some how
You will be better left alone
No one in your home
Heroes are not in this place
Searching for them will be a waste
It's just meant to be
No friends or lovers for me
So here I am standing still
Waiting for nothing
And doing nothing
Expecting nothing
I proms you will be fine
This pain must go away
Caz my heart is here to stay
I'm going to keep you save
No more of that constant crave
The world is calling you now
And we will find it some how
You will be better left alone
No one in your home
Heroes are not in this place
Searching for them will be a waste
It's just meant to be
No friends or lovers for me
So here I am standing still
Waiting for nothing
And doing nothing
Expecting nothing
Top answer
Najd, PLEASE do not center your text. It is a gimmick used only by neophytes. And do not colourize-- it is the language of a poem that is the art, not the layout!
- Najd, PLEASE do not center your text.
- It is a gimmick used only by neophytes.
- And do not colourize-- it is the language of a poem that is the art, not the layout!
- Sad eyes of mine I promise you will be fine This pain must go away 'Cause my heart is here to stay I'm going to keep you safe No more of that constant craving The world is calling you now And we will find it somehow You will be better left alone No one in your home Heroes are not in this place Searching for them will be a waste It's just meant to be No friends or lovers for me So here I am standing still Waiting for nothing And doing nothing Expecting nothing As you can see, you have a little re-writing to do after my corrections.
- Good luck with this.
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Najd, PLEASE do not center your text. It is a gimmick used only by neophytes. And do not colourize-- it is the language of a poem that is the art, not the layout!
Sad eyes of mine
I promise you will be fine
This pain must go away
'Cause my heart is here to stay
I'm going to keep you safe
No more of that constant craving
The
Sad eyes of mine
I promise you will be fine
This pain must go away
'Cause my heart is here to stay
I'm going to keep you safe
No more of that constant craving
The
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hi najid
really nice feeling
hope to improve ur poets
cause i liked ur way in writting
regards
really nice feeling
hope to improve ur poets
cause i liked ur way in writting
regards
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thanx Mister Micawber for the reply.. and it will be the first and the last time to do what i have done 
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