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Roman Posted 23 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
:-S essay about traveling in english...
I hope you understand me, I am from Germany, I haven't studied English at school. I have learnt English for only 3 years.
Ok, I'm now in specialised secondary school and it is very difficult. We must to write an essay in English tomorrow. I've written some, but I know it have many problems
Can you correct my text grammaticaly and correct my style?
Thank you very much!
Here is my text:
Text about: "Why I would to travel to the USA"
I would like to travel to the USA simly because I saw in TV many things about it but never was there. I think it would be better to see it with one's own eyes. I would like to learn more about peoble and living in USA. I would be very exciting if I travel to USA: I would to trip to Hollywood because I can meet popular Kinostars and get to know more about film creation there.
I would like to learn more about New Yourk and their sights. It would be very intresting to get know people an to talk with their(?). New Yourk is very big city so I think it takes a lot of time to get know all sights.
Above all I would to get know the nature of USA. There is many national parks. I like sport activities therefore I would to climbing on mountains or go on some tour by car in wilderness. I think the best place for this tour would be in Texas. But I won't travel alone, I would travel only with my friends!
Ok, I'm now in specialised secondary school and it is very difficult. We must to write an essay in English tomorrow. I've written some, but I know it have many problems
Can you correct my text grammaticaly and correct my style?
Thank you very much!
Here is my text:
Text about: "Why I would to travel to the USA"
I would like to travel to the USA simly because I saw in TV many things about it but never was there. I think it would be better to see it with one's own eyes. I would like to learn more about peoble and living in USA. I would be very exciting if I travel to USA: I would to trip to Hollywood because I can meet popular Kinostars and get to know more about film creation there.
I would like to learn more about New Yourk and their sights. It would be very intresting to get know people an to talk with their(?). New Yourk is very big city so I think it takes a lot of time to get know all sights.
Above all I would to get know the nature of USA. There is many national parks. I like sport activities therefore I would to climbing on mountains or go on some tour by car in wilderness. I think the best place for this tour would be in Texas. But I won't travel alone, I would travel only with my friends!
Top answer
I am sure you'll think it is a nice experience. You'll feel it is a different world, with a different mentality. The best of it is the splendor of nature.
- I am sure you'll think it is a nice experience.
- You'll feel it is a different world, with a different mentality.
- The best of it is the splendor of nature.
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I am sure you'll think it is a nice experience. You'll feel it is a different world, with a different mentality. The best of it is the splendor of nature.
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Hi Roman! in my messing point of view, it should have been "...but I've never been there" in 1st line.
By the way, do u usually watch Bundesliga?
By the way, do u usually watch Bundesliga?
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Hi Roman,
i have already read ur essay..it is good idea if u intend to travel to USA... i never go to USA but i have studied a bit about that country at Uni... the American like freedom . they do everything they want freely . their character is quite different from the British's... the British is very reserved, friendly and warm ,they dont like to talk about their private things such
i have already read ur essay..it is good idea if u intend to travel to USA... i never go to USA but i have studied a bit about that country at Uni... the American like freedom . they do everything they want freely . their character is quite different from the British's... the British is very reserved, friendly and warm ,they dont like to talk about their private things such
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