sorry, the persian text is not teling whose lineliness is of interest.I was mistaking in 'its liveliness'.it should be 'liveliness'.Does it work in english
I am not sure about your sentences but maybe instead you can say The everyday rush in our city, (instead of using "my") makes me feel alive. Or : In the morning, the city of Mazarsharif comes alive as people go bustling with their daily activities.