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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
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rush
A mad dog, with its look-like wolf fercious teeth, rushed into a giant dog, old and lethargy, and attacked it as the giant dog used to do that to any other dogs.
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A mad dog, with ferocious wolf-like teeth, rushed at the big old dog and attacked it in the same way that the old dog used to attack other dogs. Still a bit long-winded. You are trying to stuff too much into a single sentence.
- A mad dog, with ferocious wolf-like teeth, rushed at the big old dog and attacked it in the same way that the old dog used to attack other dogs.
- Still a bit long-winded.
- You are trying to stuff too much into a single sentence.
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A mad dog, with ferocious wolf-like teeth, rushed at the big old dog and attacked it in the same way that the old dog used to attack other dogs.
Still a bit long-winded. You are trying to stuff too much into a single sentence.
Still a bit long-winded. You are trying to stuff too much into a single sentence.
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