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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Grammar
Run-ons
Can someone let me know if the following is a run-on sentence or acceptable?
1st version:
This probe had to be specially designed by NASA because it has to endure various temperatures of space although it has a 10 year main voyage the electrical components are only going to be used for 2 years.
2nd version:
This probe had to be specially designed by NASA because it has to endure various temperatures of space. Although it has a 10 year main voyage, the electrical components are only going to be used for 2 years.
1st version:
This probe had to be specially designed by NASA because it has to endure various temperatures of space although it has a 10 year main voyage the electrical components are only going to be used for 2 years.
2nd version:
This probe had to be specially designed by NASA because it has to endure various temperatures of space. Although it has a 10 year main voyage, the electrical components are only going to be used for 2 years.
Top answer
The 1st version is a run-on sentence. Other notes: 10-year used for only 2 years (you may want to spell out two )
- The 1st version is a run-on sentence.
- Other notes: 10-year used for only 2 years (you may want to spell out two )
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The 1st version is a run-on sentence.
Other notes:
10-year
used for only 2 years (you may want to spell out two)
Other notes:
10-year
used for only 2 years (you may want to spell out two)
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