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Jack112 Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

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0 001. Imaging software like Symantec's Ghost Enterprise and 05000 Altiris Server have come a long way in using the PXE boot capabilities onboard 01b00nearly all server-class equipment to schedule02b00 imaging operations after hours. (I don't quite understand the bold part of the sentence. Especially the part where it goes "to schedule". Can you explain it?)02br
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002. Imaging software like Symantec's Ghost Enterprise and 05100 Altiris Server have come a long way in using the PXE boot capabilities onboard01b00,02b00 00nearly all server-class01b00 02b00equipment 01b00schedules02b00 imaging operations after hours.02br
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0 No you haven't quite got it. The original sentence is fine and yours in incorrect02br 02br 00To paraphraseto make it simpler to understand:02br 02br 00This software has come a long way. It can now use PXE boot capabilities to schedule imaging operations after hours.

— Nona the brit

  • 0 No you haven't quite got it.
  • The original sentence is fine and yours in incorrect02br 02br 00To paraphraseto make it simpler to understand:02br 02br 00This software has come a long way.
  • It can now use PXE boot capabilities to schedule imaging operations after hours.
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0 No you haven't quite got it. The original sentence is fine and yours in incorrect02br
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00This software has come a long way. It can now use PXE boot capabilities to schedule imaging operations after hours. Most server-class equipment has PXE boot capabilities.0-
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