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Nera Posted 22 years ago
Grammar
Run-on sentence
Please help me correct the following run-on sentence:
The train collided with the bus and though no one was injured on the train everyone on the bus died or was critically injured and sent to the hospital that became too full because of a previous accident involving three cars and a truck and because it was too full the passengers on the train were sent home without seeing a doctor.
The train collided with the bus and though no one was injured on the train everyone on the bus died or was critically injured and sent to the hospital that became too full because of a previous accident involving three cars and a truck and because it was too full the passengers on the train were sent home without seeing a doctor.
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Hi Nera,
Welcome to English Forums. There are several ways to approach this, but here is a minimalist effort:
'The train collided with the bus and, though no one was injured on the train, everyone on the bus died or was critically injured and sent to the hospital; that became too full because of a previous accident involving three cars and a truck, and because it was too full
Welcome to English Forums. There are several ways to approach this, but here is a minimalist effort:
'The train collided with the bus and, though no one was injured on the train, everyone on the bus died or was critically injured and sent to the hospital; that became too full because of a previous accident involving three cars and a truck, and because it was too full
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