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Rosegirl Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Rosegirl's adventure holiday. But have I made any mistakes?
Hi guys! I have an imporant task for homework: writing an informal letter about an adventure holiday that I'm am on (we have to make it all up).
Well, I wrote the letter, but I'm not sure if there are any grammar errorsor other mistakes. Would anyone please be so kind and give it a quick check? Thank you!!
An informal letter (adventure holiday).
Narsaq,
Greenland
20th February
Dear Reelika,
1. How are you? I hope you are doing well. Have you made up your mind about where you would like to go on holiday?
2. As you probably remember, I've always wanted to visit some unusual places. And now, at last, off I went! However, you'd never guess where I've chosen to spend my holiday. Well, it's Greenland! The weather looks spectacular here, especially in the morning. And the mountains are just awe-inspiring!
3. We go mountaineering every other day and take pictures from the top of the mountains! Fortunately, we’ve even seen some beautiful wildlife while riding on snowmobiles. Would you believe that everything is different here? You even need to set up your tent in a special way. It's all very challenging.
4. The people I travel with are incredible. Our guides, Martin and Jonathan know every path in the snow by heart and they are very helpful. Moreover, they share their knowledge and experience with us. However, Maarja complains about the cold every single day and Liisa almost fell into the ice cold water!
5. Well, I have to stop here, because it’s getting late. We plan to move further north tomorrow, so I’ll not be able to stay in touch for a while.
Lots of love,
Angelica
Layout:
1. Introduction
2. Describe where you are
3. Say what you are doing
4. Mention the people in the group
5. Make up an excuse to stop writing
6. Signing off
Well, I wrote the letter, but I'm not sure if there are any grammar errorsor other mistakes. Would anyone please be so kind and give it a quick check? Thank you!!
An informal letter (adventure holiday).
Narsaq,
Greenland
20th February
Dear Reelika,
1. How are you? I hope you are doing well. Have you made up your mind about where you would like to go on holiday?
2. As you probably remember, I've always wanted to visit some unusual places. And now, at last, off I went! However, you'd never guess where I've chosen to spend my holiday. Well, it's Greenland! The weather looks spectacular here, especially in the morning. And the mountains are just awe-inspiring!
3. We go mountaineering every other day and take pictures from the top of the mountains! Fortunately, we’ve even seen some beautiful wildlife while riding on snowmobiles. Would you believe that everything is different here? You even need to set up your tent in a special way. It's all very challenging.
4. The people I travel with are incredible. Our guides, Martin and Jonathan know every path in the snow by heart and they are very helpful. Moreover, they share their knowledge and experience with us. However, Maarja complains about the cold every single day and Liisa almost fell into the ice cold water!
5. Well, I have to stop here, because it’s getting late. We plan to move further north tomorrow, so I’ll not be able to stay in touch for a while.
Lots of love,
Angelica
Layout:
1. Introduction
2. Describe where you are
3. Say what you are doing
4. Mention the people in the group
5. Make up an excuse to stop writing
6. Signing off
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Hi! I'll give checking it a go :-) 2. As you probably remember, I've always wanted to visit some unusual places.
- Hi!
- I'll give checking it a go :-) 2.
- As you probably remember, I've always wanted to visit some unusual places.
- )A.
- However, you'd never guess where I've chosen to spend my holiday.
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Hi!
I'll give checking it a go :-)
2. As you probably remember, I've always wanted to visit some unusual places. And now, at last, (off I went!)A. However, you'd never guess where I've chosen to spend my holiday. Well, it's Greenland! The weather looks spectacular here, especially in the morning. And the mountains are just awe-inspiring!
4. The people I
I'll give checking it a go :-)
2. As you probably remember, I've always wanted to visit some unusual places. And now, at last, (off I went!)A. However, you'd never guess where I've chosen to spend my holiday. Well, it's Greenland! The weather looks spectacular here, especially in the morning. And the mountains are just awe-inspiring!
4. The people I
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Thank you for the help!
I'm actually from Estonia (a small country in northern europe), so English isn't my first language.
I'm actually from Estonia (a small country in northern europe), so English isn't my first language.
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