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Moguwai007 Posted 13 years ago
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Room refurbishment

Could you please check if the following sentence sounds natural.
Room refurbishment will not be done one floor at a time, but it will be done one room by one room.
  

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moguwai007 natural Not completely. Try this. I've tried to keep it as close to yours as possible.

  • moguwai007 natural Not completely.
  • Try this.
  • I've tried to keep it as close to yours as possible.
  • Remodeling will not be done one floor at a time, but room by room.
  • I'm not sure what you meant by refurbishment so I changed it to 'remodeling' because that's what I thought you meant.
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moguwai007natural
Not completely. Try this. I've tried to keep it as close to yours as possible.

Remodeling will not be done one floor at a time, but room by room.

I'm not sure what you meant by refurbishment so I changed it to 'remodeling' because that's what I thought you meant.

CJ
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Thank you very much for your correction, I appreciate it.

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