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role model

0 kindly check my grammar,punctuation mark.thanks and god bless!02br
00Who is your life's role model?02br
00My life's role model is my sister.She's 2nd to the eldest in a brood of six girls in the family. I chose her not because she's my sister but because of what she02br
00made us to be what am i right now.Before, she's only 22 years old then when she had a family of her own. She got 2 kids but the marriage failed due to unreconcilabe differences between them. Add to this maybe she's not yet capable financially and emotionally to raise a family.She worked abroad as a domestic helper to support her kids to school.Sometimes she cried because she truly misses her kids but she told us we must accept the realities of life.02br
00She had helped our mother by giving us financial needs to finish our studies which she did not experience before.I know the sacrifices of my sister to get us what we wanted in life but i got pregnant. Despite of what i have done,she wholeheartedly accepted me and managed to finish my studies with a degree in bachelor of nursing and gave her my diploma. To be strong, mature and be independent were the virtue i've learned from her 02br
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She's 2nd to the eldest in a brood of six girls in the family. Before, she's only 22 years old then when she had a family of her own. She got 2 kids but the marriage failed due to unreconcilabe differences between them.

  • She's 2nd to the eldest in a brood of six girls in the family.
  • Before, she's only 22 years old then when she had a family of her own.
  • She got 2 kids but the marriage failed due to unreconcilabe differences between them.
  • I know the sacrifices of my sister to get us what we wanted in life but i got pregnant.
  • Despite of what i have done,she wholeheartedly accepted me and managed to finish my studies with a degree in bachelor of nursing and gave her my diploma.
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0 please i need to know what's wrong with my grammar,anyone who could help me?01blockquote
01cite10Anonymous12cite10 kindly check my grammar,punctuation mark.thanks and *** bless!12br
10Who is your life's role model?12br
10My life's role model is my sister.She's 2nd to the eldest in a brood of six girls in the family. I chose he

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