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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Roaring waterfall

Please check the following sentence. In the sentence, "a glikding wedding dress" is not a natural English, how to correct it?

The roaring waterfall cascading down like a gliding wedding dress presents a spectacular view for climbers and tourists.
  

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My main problem is with the poorly matched image, not with the grammar. I would remove it as unnecessary: The roaring waterfall cascading down presents a spectacular view for climbers and tourists.

— Mister Micawber

  • My main problem is with the poorly matched image, not with the grammar.
  • I would remove it as unnecessary: The roaring waterfall cascading down presents a spectacular view for climbers and tourists.
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My main problem is with the poorly matched image, not with the grammar. I would remove it as unnecessary:

The roaring waterfall cascading down presents a spectacular view for climbers and tourists.
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