Roald Dahl: Lamb to the Slaughter

Hey:)
I have some work to do for tomorrow regarding Roald Dahl's short story "Lamb to the Slaughter". There are two questions that I need to answer:
1) After you read one of these short stories compare one of the characters in your story to a character of a story we read in class (I chose "Landlady" from Roald Dahl). Start your comparison with a description of the character in your story and then compare it to another character in the stories we read in class. In your comparison focus on the obsession that the character has.
2) Write a review of the story you liked the most (I chose Lamb to the Slaughter) and the story you did not like at all (I chose Skeleton in the Cupboard by Tony Wilmot. Address it to a friend and tell her why /why not she or he should read the story.

Here is my work: www.scribd.com/doc/213312493/Lamb-to-the-Slaughter

As I already know, EnglishForward.com is not here to do my homework and this is not what I am asking for. What I would like is someone to correct any grammatical mistakes and maybe improve the style of other sentences. Also I'd be great if anyone of you actually know the short story(-ies) in order to correct information that might be false or to add something that is important and that I left out.

Thanks in advance.