right preposition - Why?

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They argue that the stress encountered in the or our dialy lives is not only good for us, but essencial to survival. - I wrote ours, but have doubts.

Apparently, research shows that people can create conditions of stress for it by doing exiting and risky sports or looking for challenges, cope much better with life´s problems. - Can I write this sentence like this ?

Activities of this type as been shown to create a lot of emotion, people may actually cry or feel extremely uncomfortable. But there is a point on wich they realise they have succeeded and know that it was a positive experience.

Can I writte my text like above, or should I use other propositions?

Thanks.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

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I've made some edits, including corrections to some of your spelling.

Clive

They argue that the stress encountered in our daily lives is not only only good for us, but essential to survival.

Apparently, research shows that people can create conditions of stress by doing exciting and risky sports, or by looking for challenges. Such people can cope much better with life´s problems.

Activities of this type have been shown to create a lot of negative emotions. People may actually cry or feel extremely uncomfortable. However, there is a point at which they realise they have succeeded and know that it was a positive experience.

right preposition - Why?

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