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Banik Biswajit Posted 11 years ago
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right ?

User can be complete your profile and login as time share page .user data automatically crate the data base .
  

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There are a number of problems. Unfortunately I can't understand what you are trying to say clearly enough to offer any corrections.

  • There are a number of problems.
  • Unfortunately I can't understand what you are trying to say clearly enough to offer any corrections.
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There are a number of problems. Unfortunately I can't understand what you are trying to say clearly enough to offer any corrections.
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There are problems throughout. The first part is ungrammatical and does not make any sense. It's possible that you mean "Users can complete their profiles and log in ...", but I don't know what "as time share page" could be intended to mean.

The second sentence should, I suppose, say "User data automatically creates the database", but I doubt you actually mean that. Normally a data
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Maybe this?

Users can complete their profiles and log in to the "Time share" page (Is this a shared calendar with other users?). The user's data will automatically be transferred to the database.

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