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Contiluo Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Riding the bus
Please check the paragraph. Is it acceptable?
It was a busy morning. There were many comuters riding the bus to school or work in the rush hour. The bus was crowded with passengers.
It was a busy morning. There were many comuters riding the bus to school or work in the rush hour. The bus was crowded with passengers.
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I revised the sentences as written. Will it be better?
It was a busy morning. The bus was jammed with people during the rush hour.
It was a busy morning. The bus was jammed with people during the rush hour.
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