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Rich dad’s cash flow game

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00I was millionaire today in a cash flow game club joined today, feel so good. My monthly cash flow went up to 244,000 US Dollar, owing five big businesses, six real estates and some stocks. In the middle of the game, I was not so good, but the stock I brought one dollars went up to 40 times of the price, which made money affordable for an apartment consists of eight family units. Because of that, I paid main doubts and succeeded to out from rat race. 00 00The game card shows further price range, which give me credit for when buying it, which is totally different from actual life. Still, I lean a lot.00 00 0-
  

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02br 01i 00 I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 02br 01span 01span 00I 01u 00was millionaire02u 00 today in a cash flow game 01u 00club joined02u 01del 00 today02del 01u 00, feel02u 00 so good. My monthly cash flow went up to 244,000 US 01u 00Dollar, owing02u 00 five big businesses, six real 01u 00estates02u 00 and some stocks. In the middle of the game, I was not so good, but the stock I 01u 00brought one dollars02u 00 went up to 40 times 01u 00of 02u 00the price, which made01u 00 money affordable02u 00 for an apartment 01u 00consists02u 00 of eight family units.

  • 02br 01i 00 I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 02br 01span 01span 00I 01u 00was millionaire02u 00 today in a cash flow game 01u 00club joined02u 01del 00 today02del 01u 00, feel02u 00 so good.
  • My monthly cash flow went up to 244,000 US 01u 00Dollar, owing02u 00 five big businesses, six real 01u 00estates02u 00 and some stocks.
  • In the middle of the game, I was not so good, but the stock I 01u 00brought one dollars02u 00 went up to 40 times 01u 00of 02u 00the price, which made01u 00 money affordable02u 00 for an apartment 01u 00consists02u 00 of eight family units.
  • Because of that, I paid 01u 00main doubts 02u 00and succeeded01u 00 to out02u 00 from rat race.
  • 00 02span 01span 00The game 01u 00card shows further02u 00 price range, which 01u 00give 02u 00me credit 01u 00for when02u 00 buying it, which is totally different from 01u 00actual02u 00 life.
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