Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most of people say that rich countries usually give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty, therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. In my opinion, i agree with this statement because the long term benefit will help poor countries develop and developed countries gain more advantage .
Firstly, when developed countries give money to undevelop countries, it will help citizen in this countries to solve shorterm problem and it is not last long. When inhabitants in poor countries receive money from donation, they will pay the temporary cost or something that they must have. For example, in 2005, United State donated for population in undeveloped countries about 20 billion each country, but it only help people solve problem in 2 months, after two months , they were continue poorly.
Secondly, instead of giving money for poorer countries, the developed countries can make more opportunity jobs for inhabitants. From this, not only people can get money to pay cost of living, but also it make more benefit to business of developed countries. For example, in Vietnam, there are a big numbers of foreign company, it make more jobs for employment in all level, beside, there are helping Vietnam more and more development and foreign countries, too.
Overview, helping poorer by financial aid is good thing, but it will help them solve short term problems. Instead of helping is right way, it will make more benefit for them and for yourself .
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