Rhyming problems/What do you think?/Suggestions...

Hi there.

Ok, here's the deal: I like writing lyrics (only lyrics, because I can't match my lyrics to my guitar playing...), and I decided to write one just for fun. The theme is about a girl (like a perfect girl) and basketball. So, the girl is not only beautiful but is a great player as well.
I have written a few lines and rhymes alredy, but it turns out to be more difficult than I expected to be because I have to make a connection between the basketball movements (such as: fade away, lay up, tripple, crossover, you see wthat I mean..) and the reactions that the boys (audience) have. Notice that everytime I say them/their/they, I'm talking about the "boys".

Just to give you an example of what I've been doing:
You can see them fall
after you shoot the ball.
You made loose their way
with that perfect fade away

(here is suppose to come a chorus or something that keeps repeating during the all song)

You make them dribble
after your smooth triple.
You make them run for cover
after your amazing crossover.

So, basicaly, I want to know what you think and I would like you to answer something for me:
I want to rhyme loop with hoop, but I can't connect them. Maybe:
You make them loop
when you shoot the hoop.
Is this possible?

One more thing, this one was originally for this song but I'll try to put on another one:
With a pair of jeans
a normal swet
you'll gonna put
those boys all wet.
Does it sound to lame?

So, please be honest and tell me what you think.
Help me out here