Rhyme scheme

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HiCan you tell me whether I have given the rhyme scheme right?I met a traveller from an antique land Who said: `Two vast and trunkless legs of stone Stand in the desert... Near them, on the sand, Half sunk, a shattered visage lies, whose frown, And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command, Tell that its sculptor well those passions read Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things, The hand that mocked them and the heart that fed.    - For this octave -ab ab ac dc And on the pedestal these words appear -- "My name is Ozymandias, king of kings: Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!" Nothing beside remains. Round the decay Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare The lone and level sands stretch far away.'                                                                                     For this  sestet - ab cd cd

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

Note that this is iambic pentameter, the meter that all of Shakespeare's plays and sonnets are written in. The rhyme scheme appears to be:

ababa cdc (land/stone/sand/frown/command - read/things/fed)

ede fef (appear/kings/despair - decay/bare/away)

CalifJim · Answer

I met a traveller from an antique land a
Who said: `Two vast and trunkless legs of stone b
Stand in the desert... Near them, on the sand, a
Half sunk, a shattered visage lies, whose frown, (b)
And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command, a
Tell that its sculptor well those passions read c
Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things, d
The hand that mocked them and the heart that fed. c
And on the pedestal these words appear -- (e)
"My name is Ozymandias, king of kings: d
Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!" e
Nothing beside remains. Round the decay f
Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare e
The lone and level sands stretch far away.' f

I don't know how these were pronounced at the time they were written, but in modern American English, there are some rhymes that are close, but not completely true rhymes. They may have been true rhymes for the author. I placed these in parentheses.

CJ

Vsuresh · Answer

Thank you, anonymous.

Thank you very much, CJ

Anonymous · Answer

I might mention that this appears to be a sonnet, not Shakespearean, but one of the several other types of sonnets.  Thus, the rhyme scheme is some standard pattern that characterizes that particular type of sonnet. Also, the eighth line often gives trouble to readers.  What this means is:  "...its sculptor well those passions read which yet survive...the [sculptor's] hand that mocked them [i.e.:  Ozymandias' passions] and the [sculptor's] heart that [i.e.:  the sculptor's hand] fed."

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