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Pooyan Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Rewriting a Sentence

Hello,

Can we rewrite the following sentence:

“Anonymous will take down any business they have going on the internet and the ninety nine per cent will not stop until the registration has been revoked and a public apology has been made."

as:

“Anonymous will take down any business they have going on the internet and the ninety nine per cent will not stop until the registration would be revoked and a public apology would be made."

Do they mean the same?

Thanks.
  

Top answer

The second one isn't right. until the registration [is revoked / has been revoked] until an apology [is made / has been made] After until it's not will be revoked, would be revoked, will be made, would be made , or anything like that. CJ

— CalifJim

  • The second one isn't right.
  • until the registration [is revoked / has been revoked] until an apology [is made / has been made] After until it's not will be revoked, would be revoked, will be made, would be made , or anything like that.
  • CJ
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The second one isn't right.

until the registration [is revoked / has been revoked]
until an apology [is made / has been made]

After until it's not will be revoked, would be revoked, will be made, would be made, or anything like that.

CJ
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