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Can I rewrite this piece of text from a book:
Despite noises by some critics – Deutsche cites one case in particular – in the direction of a new public art immersed in, rather than aloof from, metropolitan life, such delineations always seem to collapse back into assumptions of aesthetic essence and, indeed, transcendence which ignore the city’s social processes and their effects on the everyday life of residents.
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although some critics (including Deutsche) believe in a new public art that is immersed in metropolitan life, their beliefs always seem to be based on the concepts of aesthetic essence and transcendence, the two concepts that ignore the city’s social processes and their effects on the everyday life of residents.
Despite noises by some critics – Deutsche cites one case in particular – in the direction of a new public art immersed in, rather than aloof from, metropolitan life, such delineations always seem to collapse back into assumptions of aesthetic essence and, indeed, transcendence which ignore the city’s social processes and their effects on the everyday life of residents.
like this:
although some critics (including Deutsche) believe in a new public art that is immersed in metropolitan life, their beliefs always seem to be based on the concepts of aesthetic essence and transcendence, the two concepts that ignore the city’s social processes and their effects on the everyday life of residents.
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red apple Can I rewrite this piece of text from a book:Despite noises by some critics – Deutsche cites one case in particular although some critics (including Deutsche) No. We do not know whether Deutsche is one of these critics or not. All we know is that Deutsche cited one of these critics.
- red apple Can I rewrite this piece of text from a book:Despite noises by some critics – Deutsche cites one case in particular although some critics (including Deutsche) No.
- We do not know whether Deutsche is one of these critics or not.
- All we know is that Deutsche cited one of these critics.
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red apple Can I rewrite this piece of text from a book:Despite noises by some critics – Deutsche cites one case in particular
although some critics (including Deutsche)No. We do not know whether Deutsche is one of these critics or not. All we know is that Deutsche cited one of these critics.
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