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MyShirley Posted 20 years ago
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this study is able to reflect the current situation of the music education and help music educators reflect on and contribute to their music education.

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Hi, this study is able to reflect the current situation of the music education and help music educators reflect on and contribute to their music education. I'd prefer This study describes the current state of music education and will help music educators to reflect on and to contribute to their field. ] Best wishes, Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, this study is able to reflect the current situation of the music education and help music educators reflect on and contribute to their music education.
  • I'd prefer This study describes the current state of music education and will help music educators to reflect on and to contribute to their field.
  • ] Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

this study is able to reflect the current situation of the music education and help music educators reflect on and contribute to their music education.

I'd prefer

This study describes the current state of music education and will help music educators to reflect on and to contribute to their field.

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It is interesting that you use the word reflect twice, and each time the meaning is different. In the first instance, to "show something." In the second, it is to "think seriously."

An alternative:

This study illustrates the current status of music education; it also helps music educators to reflect upon their prior training, while contributing to their continuing education.
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