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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Throughout the world, children have many opportunities to receive music education, for example in countries such as Germany, America, Britain, Japan, Korea, China, Taiwan and Hong Kong. However, these countries all demonstrate the same phenomenon, that when the children become senior students they will no longer learn music. The reasons for this include their need to sit for pre-university examinations, changes in their attitudes about learning music, and the fact that the system of music education has been neglected.

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  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Throughout the world, children have many opportunities to receive music education, for example in countries such as Germany, America, Britain, Japan, Korea, China, Taiwan and Hong Kong.
  • However, these countries all demonstrate the same phenomenon, that when the children become senior students they will no longer learn music.
  • The reasons for this include their need to sit for pre-university examinations, changes in their attitudes about learning music, and the fact that the system of music education has been neglected.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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