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MyShirley Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

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0Music background is related to students’ motivation of listening to music, their feelings from enjoyment of music and their choices of music.02br
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00How do you rewrite this sentence? I want to make it more clear...02br
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0Maybe something like this ?02br
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01font00A student's musical background is related to his motivation for listening music, the enjoyment experienced, and the variety of his musical choices.02font02br
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00Hopefully CalifJim or Clive are around and will improve it...0-
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0"Related to" simply says that there is a connection. I think you might want to say that one actually affects the other. In science, you'd say "correllation is not causation" meaning that two things that simultaneuosly exist does not mean that one creates the other.02br
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00Does this come close to what you want to say?02br
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0There you go... CalifJim didn't show up but PennyBarb came to our rescue 05000...02br
00Thxs GrammarGeek, this definitely looks better !02br
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